tasksource/argument-feedback · Datasets at Hugging Face

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b8457458398d	54351180CD4F	As stated before, many people, including scientists, believe that the Face on Mars is an alien artifact and here are their reasons why	Counterclaim	Adequate
225c00892841	54351180CD4F	As the photo of the Face on Mars was being taken, it was claimed that the "camera on board MGS had to peer through the wispy clouds to see the Face," and according to skeptics, "alien markings were hidden by haze."	Evidence	Adequate
ab80e784e465	54351180CD4F	This did not stop mission controllers, and they prepared to look again.	Rebuttal	Adequate
581e8229ab28	54351180CD4F	Garvin states that " It's not easy to target Cydonia," and that its hardwork.	Evidence	Ineffective
a96eb1652493	54351180CD4F	Conspiracy theorists believe that the Face is "bona-fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide."	Counterclaim	Adequate
126c30beb69c	54351180CD4F	Now this may all sound convincing, but it was also added that you can discern things in digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, causing false illusions.	Rebuttal	Adequate
47059511725d	54351180CD4F	In conlusion, after analyizing the data and research given, I believe that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. Others may disagree, but it is all about your interprutation on the topic, and hopefully the evidence used to support my claims did just that.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
a416c367ebc3	547C43CF3291	to bein with the passage mainly states or really talk bout the things that make up the percent of cair pollution in the airlike 70 pecent of and 57 percent of the cars moved car are better then bike because bike your pedaling cars your just pushing the gas and it makes you goes faster 12 pecent of the grenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes to passengers vars are most intensive in the united states all the cars since ww2 had been ways to move equipment to travel long places and miles it was used as the tranportation of amerin cars are the most unrelated. second of all levitttown and scardale newyork suburbs was a wide spread out homes and private tranportation bills were formed by mister goldberg he said 80 oercent of approriatins have law gone 20 percent to eachother transport the passage also say america have a air pollution record for the most bad pollution in the air in the lobal city wise they say in most cities and countries say for instance china have mor bike riders and walkers do the have cars that y they have so much money because they dint used up allof the observation they save thats why china nd places like africa are rich countries third of of all that why china nights be so cold thats why it dont bethat much sicness because every one know what it takes to not pollute the air and all kinds of nonpoticular things that america does to pollute our air 67 percent of vehicles and france is compared to 57.3 percent of our cars in 73 percent in london well anyways china have long cold nights because its not that much gas or pollution in the air to me and others all scientists thats a good thing.	Evidence	Ineffective
f96c6137e095	5484CC372842	Summer break is that time of the year where most students look forward to. Many are eager to sit back and relax, or enjoy their time with friends and family. Whatever it is, school is the last thing on their mind. It's the last thing on my mind too. Although that isn't always the case, there is always that one teacher that assigns projects over break. Summer projects are required through some schools to preserve their learning onto the next year.	Lead	Effective
dee0e5d5af3b	5484CC372842	To make it more enjoyable, I believe that these summer projects should at least be student-designed for various reasons.	Position	Effective
cbb14c5a9cbd	5484CC372842	Summer break is the time where most students proceed to pursue hobbies, enjoy lifes moments, spend time with people that are cared about, and make memorial memories. Over break, students tend to discover their true passions and focus on what drives their interest. With projects being assigned, that can be tough and build a wedge between the situation. If summer projects were to be student-designed however, students can make it more personalized and just have fun with it. I believe making the summer projects more personalized to students, can really ease the stress and make it more enjoyable. Overall, it is summer break. As a student myself, a time where this applied to me was in the summer of my freshman year. My teacher had assigned a summer project where we had to determine the area of different shapes in any form. Art is a huge passion of mine and I wanted to engage more of it into my summer. I decided to paint an abstract painting with a variety of shapes; circles, triangles, squares, you name it. It turned out beautiful, I really enjoyed spending my time on something that was educating and delightful.	Evidence	Effective
d6c8a1639842	5484CC372842	Engaging learning with enjoyable hobbies can be beneficial for the teachers' satisfactory and the students.	Claim	Effective
4d62981f3d2d	5484CC372842	For most people, finding hobbies that are interesting can be challenging. Knowing myself, I need a sense of direction to know what my interests. It takes a bit of courage to try something new and actually enjoy it.	Evidence	Effective
8089fe4d82f1	5484CC372842	Student designed school projects can really help a student find his/her passions and learn something new along the way.	Claim	Effective
a4783c679d28	5484CC372842	Although students might think making school projects student-designed is a good idea, teachers might not agree. Some students could take this their advantage, by making the project as simple and pointless as they want. This could necessarily not reach the teachers standards and question if the student even learned anything at all.	Counterclaim	Effective
7c8feba2854b	5484CC372842	Although this could be case, summer projects are indeed just summer projects and should not be taken seriously. Summer should be the time where students can have the choice of doing what they want. If projects are mandatory for teachers, then it can be arranged, but it shouldn't put unnecessary stress on students. Especially during summer break. Teachers should observe how well the student comes up with ideas and how well they execute their projects, it's more exciting that way.	Rebuttal	Effective
f179ab9ec5cb	5484CC372842	Having being said, student designed projects are better for both the student and the teacher. It allows students to have more freedom and personalize their studies with their occupation. Teachers will also have the chance to determine the students personality and see what the student is like. It shows how bright a student's mind can be and how well their work ethics are. Teachers should give students a chance to show off themselves and appreciate for what they are able to achieve in. It can also be a fun learning experience for many. Not only will these student-designed projects continue their learning throughout break, it will also preserve any sort of creativity a student could withhold.	Concluding Statement	Effective
eb032ff75929	54B7666CDA35	Hello my name is luke and im am in the Seagoing cowboys program. My friend Don Reist invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I work two part time jobs in a grocery store. It was 1945, World War 2 ended in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. This was and opportunity for me to be drafted in the military service. I couldn't tell my friend no. So I went with him. The cattle-trip were an unbelieveable opportunity for a small -town boy. Also, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA(the United Relief and Rehabilitation). I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. Seeing the Acropolis in Greece. It took about to weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to china. I was busy caring for the animals during the crossing. My job was to check on the animals every hour. I also found time to have fun on board. We played baseball and volleyball .	Evidence	Ineffective
ae5f1d7d34c9	54F17F5A8C3C	Obvously the aurthor must be a fan of scientific and that's great because I am to! The aurthor feels as if, there is multiple things you can do in life and thats means if going out your comfort zone to do it then so be it. In the story and as I was reading it, he really wants to find out more about earth and its "neighbors", as I should say. Venus and Mars are close to earth, but venus is closer, and the reason I say that is because of size and density	Lead	Adequate
b6b5180f5b04	54F17F5A8C3C	In the text, it says that we as humas, we have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud-draped world and the reason being is because we and he also, wanted to find out more about venus and how it works and many diffrent features	Position	Ineffective
8e91b4cbc27f	54F17F5A8C3C	Venus has a thick type of surface to it. It has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets. In the atmosphere of venus, there is a type of acid called "Sulfuric Acid" and this acid is basically the determination of the temperture for this planet. The average temperture for venus is 800 degrees Fahrenhiet, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what it would be on earth by its-self. Venus also has the hottest surface temperture of any planet in our solar system even though we have mercury closer to the sun venus is still hotter.	Evidence	Ineffective
4e54b653e2b7	54F17F5A8C3C	The reason people and scientist are so fasinated with venus and how it works is because it was one of the closest to being more like earth and it has some features like it to	Claim	Adequate
c598797e962f	54F17F5A8C3C	This planet has more like valleys, mountains, and craters and as a author he wants to find out about more of the festure and how this will benifit him more in life if he were to continue searching about venus and earth and how they are diffrent and similar to each other	Evidence	Adequate
13e1ed5a94db	54F17F5A8C3C	By the 1800's the" mechanical computer" that was made for visual insight of venus and other planets around and near earth. These devices made caculations by using gears, and tool like things that hepled scientist in the 1800's up and somewhat past the 1940's.	Evidence	Ineffective
c28db02d5c45	54F17F5A8C3C	So in this passage, the author gave me some information about the earth, venus, mars, life, merchury, and etc. The author basically is saying at the end of the passage, that if you were to go out your comfort zone to go explore things like earth and scientific material things, that it would'nt hurt and now that I know I feel as if the author will end up exploring more about venus and that is has some good feature and bad features and the same with earth but in reality it isnt bad.	Concluding Statement	Adequate
19a019264c79	550102B59704	Why I think that Luke should join the program.	Position	Adequate
6eb21660c0fe	550102B59704	I think he should join the program beacause he is a good person in the story. Also I think should because he really does anything bad in the story he just things that won't get him in trouble. But also he is a good child in the story he deserves to be in that program because their is no actual reson he can't be part of that program. Also Luke does really deserve to be in that program because i don't think he has been in any other program in his life as it said in the story. But one thing that really stands out to me is that why cant he be part of that program because their really is no reason that he shouldn't be in that program. Why Luke should be part of the program. I think that Luke should be part of that program because in the story it said that Luke really wants to be in that program because he has worked his whole life to be in that program. And another one of the reasons I think that he should be in that progrsm because he has worked his whole life for to get that program and also in the story it said that Luke would not give up to get into that program and be part of the program because he thinks that he deserves to be in that program and I think that he is qualified to be on that program. why I think that Luke should be in that program. He deserves to be in that program because he their is no reason he should't be in that program. He is also a hard worker like it said in the text if I was Luke I would never give up to getting into that academy because if that was my dream I would never stop trying to get into that academy because I want to do something important in my life like join the academy Luke wants to join or be a doctor I never give up on my dreams. that why I think Luke should join that academy.	Evidence	Ineffective
3e4102ba88bc	551D2A846180	so today i will be talking about my opion and how i feel about his whole little computre experssing reader and how do it will it worki and i feel that affects people	Lead	Ineffective
68cdacfaca4d	551D2A846180	hosnlty i feel like thats a bad isea because dont nobody want noody all in they bussuins iyou should let people feel how they wanna feel	Position	Adequate
71e92f5e9772	551D2A846180	According to the packge i just read the computre is a 3d modle that tells reather you sad or happy or any other mixed emotions someone can have if you sad this ad will pop up if you make a angery face anorther will pop up to make sure they read it rigth honstly	Evidence	Ineffective
d27d16f8f9f6	551D2A846180	i feel like this the dunbst idea every because it seem like technolgy is just taking over the world as it all ready .	Claim	Ineffective
854fdcaedd81	551D2A846180	I feel liek you should just leave people alone	Claim	Ineffective
6b81c963eb62	551D2A846180	becauseif they feeling some type of way let them be stop always trying to be nosiey be and somebody bussins its not right stop trying to be caption save o let people be let them leave they life then if people find out you sad gthry going to be all up in your face like just leave people alone and let them be	Evidence	Ineffective
bb084b45c89e	551D2A846180	In Conclusion i think the idea is stupid ion think you should do it yall just letting tecnolgy take all the way over i feel yall shoukd just let people be if somebody want someone to they moody they will tell them maybe talking about it make them madder then what they is you never know thsts why its important to mind your bussins	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
fe2daefbd461	5534E738B129	i disagree that all students should have at least one extracurricular activity	Position	Adequate
ac8b3ee29229	5534E738B129	most of the students spend most of their time outside running, playing different sports and more they could get stressed by having to play sports each time of day and as a result the students could lose interest of playing sports.	Claim	Adequate
fb0242d7adf8	5534E738B129	i think that students might not need an extracurricular activity because each student has a gym class	Claim	Adequate
070b115e1cb7	5534E738B129	in gym class each students does many different activitys including excerise, paser, sit in reach, jumping jacks and other different activitys.	Evidence	Adequate
60569b5137cc	5534E738B129	the students could get tired	Claim	Adequate
eaf1e15c5700	5534E738B129	causing them to not pay attention to the teacher and they could miss important information that the teacher is teaching them and that will cause the student to get a bad grade in class and fail the class.	Evidence	Adequate
3fe6fa60beb3	5534E738B129	Finally students shouldn't have an extracurricular activity because it could make the students very stressed and tired at school	Claim	Adequate
8b1bc5e0e392	5534E738B129	they spend their time outside to play sports also students have gym classes where they do many different activitys.	Evidence	Ineffective
d47123facfb1	55B4B2BFF231	In this passage I personally think that he did an good job with this artical.	Position	Adequate
e35cf13cb7da	55B4B2BFF231	He mad sure that he included everythings that he needed to put in the artical.	Evidence	Adequate
b0b8b7e52930	55B4B2BFF231	venus is earth sister	Claim	Adequate
bfe40e3ba6ac	55B4B2BFF231	NASA going to check out other planets	Claim	Adequate
ba01f4c89e0a	55B4B2BFF231	explain the planet to.	Claim	Adequate
c0c54e71d0f6	55B4B2BFF231	Venus is the sister ouf the plantet earth because its to closes to earth.	Claim	Adequate
985226d47d9e	55B4B2BFF231	What i mean to the closes is Venus could possible be another earth because it has the same features and it may well once have been the most earth - like plantet in our solar system, and in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth is closes to venus and mars but orbit the sun at different speeds means sometimes we are closer to mar and sometime venus.	Evidence	Adequate
a4f3f435ea46	55B4B2BFF231	The NASA has talked about idea like sending humans to study venus.	Claim	Adequate
16e64eef1799	55B4B2BFF231	They talk about what they going to bring and how far it is and what they are going to be doing. in the passage he talked about what happen in the war and how did it affect . and maybe having electronics up there too.	Evidence	Ineffective
b82b268e0613	55B4B2BFF231	This passage describe venus	Claim	Ineffective
bf834bbffa00	55B4B2BFF231	he say that the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanets venus. The temperature in venus could averagr over 800 degrees fahrenheit. he dec=scrive the atnospheric pressure as 90 times greater than what we experience on earth.	Evidence	Adequate
94b1660c3925	55B4B2BFF231	In this passage I learned alot that i did not know about. I personally think he did good in this passage because he made me learn and i enjoyed reading this passage . I learn about venus and learn about NASA and what they might going to do.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
92111ff91066	561798F1DC3D	Well it's getting close to that time of year again, summer time! Warm air, bright shinning sun, and many activities that are only available during the summer season. But if you are like some students who go to certain schools maybe not so much. Some schools across the country require students to preform school based learning projects during their summer break. There projects are said to continue in helping kids and teens learn about subjects outside of school. Most of the projects are given by the teacher for the student to complete but some think that this decision should change.	Lead	Effective
7fe2c71a632f	561798F1DC3D	What many teachers don't realize is that teenagers are slowly being thrown into adulthood. Every year we have seen more and more teenagers be pushed into adult responsibility even when they are so young. Many students have to get jobs in the summer to support their families and help them. Some students work on farms which require all hands on deck. Some students even have wives and children to take care of.	Evidence	Effective
6c541f3d945d	561798F1DC3D	While the idea of the over the summer projects are neat they really should be student run.	Position	Adequate
33049f90a540	561798F1DC3D	These students want the power this time and the choice to choose what they want to do. They want to be able to pick the subject that they are interested in and pursue it, this time with nothing and no one in their way.	Claim	Effective
4506597003e4	561798F1DC3D	Many students in the United States have been diagnosed with a learning disability. Whether is be reading, understand, or they just generally struggle to grasp a concept, these student have it hard. They are already given a disadvantage when they enter into the learning ring. Many of the students attend summer programs to assist them with their disabilities. Many teachers do not take this into account which leads to upset, angry, and stressed out students who truly can't help it. However, with them in control of these summer projects they could make something that conforms to them.	Evidence	Effective
69ce3093ef1f	561798F1DC3D	The project, with them behind the learning wheel, could also assist them with their disability.	Claim	Effective
07519bad3238	561798F1DC3D	They could make it something they understand and can learn at their own pace while also learning about something they enjoy. They can finally be set free and be given the power and choice to learn a pursuing subject, but also have something that conforms to their personal needs.	Evidence	Effective
c857aac7bcef	561798F1DC3D	Students as a word is something that a lot of people see as a word used to describe kids and teens who go to school, learn, then return to perfect homes. That might have been the case year ago, but not anymore. In today's society kids and teens are being pushed to take responsibility. They are being pushed to work and survive without guidance from parental figures. The idea of the over the summer projects is neat, but if they are truly going to work then the students should be in control. Getting a choice and a say so in the matter is what may students long for and want, because they may have never had it before. They get to choose and pursue something they may have always dreamed of and want to chase after. With nothing holding them back except their drive and imaginations, these students will finally have a choice to follow their dreams to something much bigger.	Concluding Statement	Effective
6bdb2bce8695	56193E77BB71	Every living thing on planet earth has emotions. These emotions have been used since the beginning of time to express the feelings of the people around you. However, these emotions can be decieving. Someone could say they are happy, when really they are angry or upset. This is where the Facial Action Coding System comes into play. The FACS is a software that detects human emotion by tracking muscles in the face. For example, when you are happy, muscles in your face move up, and when you are sad, they move down, FACS tracks this and calculates your emotions. The creators of this software, Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe are the leading experts of developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. There are still some questions surrounding the usefulness of FACS, like what could this software actually be used for? One of the ways FACS may be used is in classrooms.	Lead	Effective
bf3306908bc9	56193E77BB71	It may sound far fetched, but actually, FACS may be the best thing to come to schools	Position	Effective
163b86285c57	56193E77BB71	flexible learning	Claim	Effective
1ad1a117e4d8	56193E77BB71	the ability to read the students.	Claim	Effective
8a409375a2fc	56193E77BB71	In the education world, teachers are the backbone of the infestructure. Without teachers, the whole system would collapse. However, it may be hard for one teacher to connect with every student individually and make sure they are learning properly or if they are paying attention. This is where FACS comes in. In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile", Dr. Huang talks about FACS in classrooms more in depth, "'A classroom computer could recgonize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human istructor.'"	Evidence	Effective
9f98a8c2d547	56193E77BB71	With FACS, every child could essentially have a customized lesson plan exactly for their needs. This would make children more eager to learn because they begin to enjoy it.	Claim	Effective
502918097e58	56193E77BB71	Besides the classroom, FACS could also be used in the school elsewhere.	Claim	Adequate
0ac600d4c6fe	56193E77BB71	One of the other important areas this could be used is in counceling.	Evidence	Adequate
94c27bb04232	56193E77BB71	It is very hard for anyone to tell someone they are sad. This is especally true when they barely know the person they are talking to. This can be the case for school councelors and the children they are meeting with. FACS may be able to help.	Evidence	Effective
fe962fb2be21	56193E77BB71	With FACS, the school could see if children are upset or scared.	Claim	Effective
0e18a9088782	56193E77BB71	The school could also see how often these children feel this way. When a child is unhappy or scared, it is very unlikely that they are going to be doing their work at full capacity. If FACS could find these children that need help, they could be helped faster. This could also be used to find children being bullied. If the child is feeling scared around another student, or if a child is afraid of a classroom, they could be helped because FACS was able to read them. FACS may even be able to detect if a child is afraid of leaving school. With FACS, it's like every child in school has someone that is looking out for them, even if no one else is	Evidence	Effective
b87b3fa925dd	56193E77BB71	It may be true that some children might not want people to know about this, that they may want to hide it.	Counterclaim	Adequate
3c7ed500d7ee	56193E77BB71	However, it is never healthy to hide such strong emotions, especally if there are people around you willing to help.	Rebuttal	Adequate
c1d5e682987c	56193E77BB71	With the constant evoultion of the way we learn, its not suprising that something like FACS was created. Emotions have been with everything living since the beginning of time. Before FACS, it was suprisingly difficult to read these emotions in people. Such a crucial part of our everyday lives could be easily hidden away by a fake smile or a theatre tear. But now that there is FACS helping out, looks are no longer decieving.	Concluding Statement	Effective
28049e905d03	565B5C8E9B05	This story is about evaluating The Challenge of Exploring Venus. In the first paragraph it is kinda misleading because it says that venus sometimes called the evening star is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Then it goes on to talk about how venus is also a planet so the name is very misleading. Then paragraph two it talks about how its a planet again not a star and its saying that its the closest planet to earth.	Lead	Ineffective
5b0ff087dc00	565B5C8E9B05	Venus is the closest planet to earth and yet to there has been a spacecraft to survive the landing. Although it could be a little bit tough seems haw venus's atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. On venus surface the temperatues average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. With that kind of heat and pressure could even crush a submarine.	Evidence	Ineffective
56de9c2703e2	565B5C8E9B05	In conclusion the story had some great details about what venus was like compared to earth but i also think that it was a little misleading about star planet and i think that could have been fixed up so it didnt have you on your toes trying to find out wether or not it was a star or a planet that was earths twin.	Concluding Statement	Ineffective
fbb2ffc9998d	567D7BBCEF48	Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and accasionally the closest in distance too. the speed between Mars, Venus, and Earth orbit the sun in different speeds. these difference in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times venus A thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmophere. on the planet's surface, tempers average over 800 degrees	Evidence	Ineffective
9d7d2a5bce04	567D7BBCEF48	this showws how dangerous it s trying to study venus specially with the high percentages that this story has about venus.	Claim	Ineffective
ab1c1541d1fa	567D7BBCEF48	Paragraph 4 the authour asks " if our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing further visit to its surface?" he states that astronomers are fasinated by planet in our solor system , long ago, Venus was probably covered large;y with oceans and could have supported varous forms of life, just like earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.	Evidence	Ineffective
b2f2ae1d93f4	56C208138AC9	I think people should join the program	Position	Adequate
096aa4210a63	56C208138AC9	that way they or we can help people or other countries in need of help.	Claim	Adequate
58f7aa72dae1	56C208138AC9	If other countries need help or something like water or food or something like that like maybe more homes to build for the homeless. Another good thing about it is that you can travel around the world and the states like if there are more animals do in need because they are in danger and almost extinct! The best part is that you go out around the world and help out everything and if you are in the news for that and the people see that you were on the news with all of you friends then they might as well congratulat you.	Evidence	Ineffective
1403da5c2ff3	56C6D97AF40B	Hi, I'm Luke Bomberger. I was a Seagoing Cowboy. You might be pondering what that is, and if you are, I will inform you. Seagoing Cowboys help animals, mostly horses, donkeys, cows, and mules, that are being shipped overseas to avoid harm get to their destination. Are you thinking that you maight like being part of this program?	Lead	Effective
a8d754a056fa	56C6D97AF40B	you can help animals that are in danger and get to know them	Claim	Adequate
6319a5bed0d3	56C6D97AF40B	This gives you a good feeling of helpfulness and compassion. I love to save lives, especially if they're animals'. I also liked to be freinds with them. Even though there are many other people on the boat with you, the creatures all have their own personalities, and this makes them fun to hang out with.	Evidence	Ineffective
d068e2c646e8	56C6D97AF40B	you get to see the world	Claim	Adequate
8f032a3e75da	56C6D97AF40B	I have seen the Acropolis in Greece, the Panama Canal, and an excavated castle in Crete. I have been to Europe, China, and Italy. You can go to all of these places, see these sights, and more if you join their program.	Evidence	Ineffective
d1159378b384	56C6D97AF40B	there are so many people on the boat with you that it is impossible not to make a friend and have fun almost every day	Claim	Adequate
c6e7892bfd80	56C6D97AF40B	I have made ample new companions. There are also many games played on the ship. They include baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, reading, boxing, and whittling. As you can probably tell, these are all exciting to do with your buddies.	Evidence	Adequate
2d5fc09b6746	56C6D97AF40B	Although there are a few risks, such as stormy weather,	Counterclaim	Adequate
ee39a6f12f67	56C6D97AF40B	t is worth it to see the animals get safely to their destination. You can join knowing that you will be making big differences in millions of creatures' lives.	Rebuttal	Adequate
4c2eabf2f146	56C6D97AF40B	If you want to have an amazing time with friends, play enjoyable games, see awesome landmarks and buildings, and help and make friends with animals	Concluding Statement	Adequate
61e554f11dd1	56C6D97AF40B	you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.	Position	Adequate
1a3ec4398995	57076BE40C47	limiting car usage can have many advantages	Position	Adequate
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9ad35505255a	57076BE40C47	Keeping the earth clean but banning cars can make the enviornment a better place.	Evidence	Adequate
7b02ab4a14be	57076BE40C47	limiting the use of cars can be very good for our enviornment because it would make the air less polluted	Claim	Adequate

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As stated before, many people, including scientists, believe that the Face on Mars is an alien artifact and here are their reasons why

Counterclaim

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As the photo of the Face on Mars was being taken, it was claimed that the "camera on board MGS had to peer through the wispy clouds to see the Face," and according to skeptics, "alien markings were hidden by haze."

Evidence

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This did not stop mission controllers, and they prepared to look again.

Rebuttal

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Garvin states that " It's not easy to target Cydonia," and that its hardwork.

Evidence

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Conspiracy theorists believe that the Face is "bona-fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide."

Counterclaim

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Now this may all sound convincing, but it was also added that you can discern things in digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, causing false illusions.

Rebuttal

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In conlusion, after analyizing the data and research given, I believe that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. Others may disagree, but it is all about your interprutation on the topic, and hopefully the evidence used to support my claims did just that.

Concluding Statement

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to bein with the passage mainly states or really talk bout the things that make up the percent of cair pollution in the airlike 70 pecent of and 57 percent of the cars moved car are better then bike because bike your pedaling cars your just pushing the gas and it makes you goes faster 12 pecent of the grenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes to passengers vars are most intensive in the united states all the cars since ww2 had been ways to move equipment to travel long places and miles it was used as the tranportation of amerin cars are the most unrelated. second of all levitttown and scardale newyork suburbs was a wide spread out homes and private tranportation bills were formed by mister goldberg he said 80 oercent of approriatins have law gone 20 percent to eachother transport the passage also say america have a air pollution record for the most bad pollution in the air in the lobal city wise they say in most cities and countries say for instance china have mor bike riders and walkers do the have cars that y they have so much money because they dint used up allof the observation they save thats why china nd places like africa are rich countries third of of all that why china nights be so cold thats why it dont bethat much sicness because every one know what it takes to not pollute the air and all kinds of nonpoticular things that america does to pollute our air 67 percent of vehicles and france is compared to 57.3 percent of our cars in 73 percent in london well anyways china have long cold nights because its not that much gas or pollution in the air to me and others all scientists thats a good thing.

Evidence

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Summer break is that time of the year where most students look forward to. Many are eager to sit back and relax, or enjoy their time with friends and family. Whatever it is, school is the last thing on their mind. It's the last thing on my mind too. Although that isn't always the case, there is always that one teacher that assigns projects over break. Summer projects are required through some schools to preserve their learning onto the next year.

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To make it more enjoyable, I believe that these summer projects should at least be student-designed for various reasons.

Position

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Summer break is the time where most students proceed to pursue hobbies, enjoy lifes moments, spend time with people that are cared about, and make memorial memories. Over break, students tend to discover their true passions and focus on what drives their interest. With projects being assigned, that can be tough and build a wedge between the situation. If summer projects were to be student-designed however, students can make it more personalized and just have fun with it. I believe making the summer projects more personalized to students, can really ease the stress and make it more enjoyable. Overall, it is summer break. As a student myself, a time where this applied to me was in the summer of my freshman year. My teacher had assigned a summer project where we had to determine the area of different shapes in any form. Art is a huge passion of mine and I wanted to engage more of it into my summer. I decided to paint an abstract painting with a variety of shapes; circles, triangles, squares, you name it. It turned out beautiful, I really enjoyed spending my time on something that was educating and delightful.

Evidence

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Engaging learning with enjoyable hobbies can be beneficial for the teachers' satisfactory and the students.

Claim

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For most people, finding hobbies that are interesting can be challenging. Knowing myself, I need a sense of direction to know what my interests. It takes a bit of courage to try something new and actually enjoy it.

Evidence

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Student designed school projects can really help a student find his/her passions and learn something new along the way.

Claim

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Although students might think making school projects student-designed is a good idea, teachers might not agree. Some students could take this their advantage, by making the project as simple and pointless as they want. This could necessarily not reach the teachers standards and question if the student even learned anything at all.

Counterclaim

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Although this could be case, summer projects are indeed just summer projects and should not be taken seriously. Summer should be the time where students can have the choice of doing what they want. If projects are mandatory for teachers, then it can be arranged, but it shouldn't put unnecessary stress on students. Especially during summer break. Teachers should observe how well the student comes up with ideas and how well they execute their projects, it's more exciting that way.

Rebuttal

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Having being said, student designed projects are better for both the student and the teacher. It allows students to have more freedom and personalize their studies with their occupation. Teachers will also have the chance to determine the students personality and see what the student is like. It shows how bright a student's mind can be and how well their work ethics are. Teachers should give students a chance to show off themselves and appreciate for what they are able to achieve in. It can also be a fun learning experience for many. Not only will these student-designed projects continue their learning throughout break, it will also preserve any sort of creativity a student could withhold.

Concluding Statement

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Hello my name is luke and im am in the Seagoing cowboys program. My friend Don Reist invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I work two part time jobs in a grocery store. It was 1945, World War 2 ended in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. This was and opportunity for me to be drafted in the military service. I couldn't tell my friend no. So I went with him. The cattle-trip were an unbelieveable opportunity for a small -town boy. Also, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA(the United Relief and Rehabilitation). I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. Seeing the Acropolis in Greece. It took about to weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to china. I was busy caring for the animals during the crossing. My job was to check on the animals every hour. I also found time to have fun on board. We played baseball and volleyball .

Evidence

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Obvously the aurthor must be a fan of scientific and that's great because I am to! The aurthor feels as if, there is multiple things you can do in life and thats means if going out your comfort zone to do it then so be it. In the story and as I was reading it, he really wants to find out more about earth and its "neighbors", as I should say. Venus and Mars are close to earth, but venus is closer, and the reason I say that is because of size and density

Lead

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In the text, it says that we as humas, we have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud-draped world and the reason being is because we and he also, wanted to find out more about venus and how it works and many diffrent features

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Venus has a thick type of surface to it. It has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets. In the atmosphere of venus, there is a type of acid called "Sulfuric Acid" and this acid is basically the determination of the temperture for this planet. The average temperture for venus is 800 degrees Fahrenhiet, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what it would be on earth by its-self. Venus also has the hottest surface temperture of any planet in our solar system even though we have mercury closer to the sun venus is still hotter.

Evidence

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The reason people and scientist are so fasinated with venus and how it works is because it was one of the closest to being more like earth and it has some features like it to

Claim

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This planet has more like valleys, mountains, and craters and as a author he wants to find out about more of the festure and how this will benifit him more in life if he were to continue searching about venus and earth and how they are diffrent and similar to each other

Evidence

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By the 1800's the" mechanical computer" that was made for visual insight of venus and other planets around and near earth. These devices made caculations by using gears, and tool like things that hepled scientist in the 1800's up and somewhat past the 1940's.

Evidence

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So in this passage, the author gave me some information about the earth, venus, mars, life, merchury, and etc. The author basically is saying at the end of the passage, that if you were to go out your comfort zone to go explore things like earth and scientific material things, that it would'nt hurt and now that I know I feel as if the author will end up exploring more about venus and that is has some good feature and bad features and the same with earth but in reality it isnt bad.

Concluding Statement

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Why I think that Luke should join the program.

Position

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I think he should join the program beacause he is a good person in the story. Also I think should because he really does anything bad in the story he just things that won't get him in trouble. But also he is a good child in the story he deserves to be in that program because their is no actual reson he can't be part of that program. Also Luke does really deserve to be in that program because i don't think he has been in any other program in his life as it said in the story. But one thing that really stands out to me is that why cant he be part of that program because their really is no reason that he shouldn't be in that program. Why Luke should be part of the program. I think that Luke should be part of that program because in the story it said that Luke really wants to be in that program because he has worked his whole life to be in that program. And another one of the reasons I think that he should be in that progrsm because he has worked his whole life for to get that program and also in the story it said that Luke would not give up to get into that program and be part of the program because he thinks that he deserves to be in that program and I think that he is qualified to be on that program. why I think that Luke should be in that program. He deserves to be in that program because he their is no reason he should't be in that program. He is also a hard worker like it said in the text if I was Luke I would never give up to getting into that academy because if that was my dream I would never stop trying to get into that academy because I want to do something important in my life like join the academy Luke wants to join or be a doctor I never give up on my dreams. that why I think Luke should join that academy.

Evidence

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so today i will be talking about my opion and how i feel about his whole little computre experssing reader and how do it will it worki and i feel that affects people

Lead

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hosnlty i feel like thats a bad isea because dont nobody want noody all in they bussuins iyou should let people feel how they wanna feel

Position

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According to the packge i just read the computre is a 3d modle that tells reather you sad or happy or any other mixed emotions someone can have if you sad this ad will pop up if you make a angery face anorther will pop up to make sure they read it rigth honstly

Evidence

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i feel like this the dunbst idea every because it seem like technolgy is just taking over the world as it all ready .

Claim

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I feel liek you should just leave people alone

Claim

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becauseif they feeling some type of way let them be stop always trying to be nosiey be and somebody bussins its not right stop trying to be caption save o let people be let them leave they life then if people find out you sad gthry going to be all up in your face like just leave people alone and let them be

Evidence

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In Conclusion i think the idea is stupid ion think you should do it yall just letting tecnolgy take all the way over i feel yall shoukd just let people be if somebody want someone to they moody they will tell them maybe talking about it make them madder then what they is you never know thsts why its important to mind your bussins

Concluding Statement

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i disagree that all students should have at least one extracurricular activity

Position

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most of the students spend most of their time outside running, playing different sports and more they could get stressed by having to play sports each time of day and as a result the students could lose interest of playing sports.

Claim

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i think that students might not need an extracurricular activity because each student has a gym class

Claim

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in gym class each students does many different activitys including excerise, paser, sit in reach, jumping jacks and other different activitys.

Evidence

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the students could get tired

Claim

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causing them to not pay attention to the teacher and they could miss important information that the teacher is teaching them and that will cause the student to get a bad grade in class and fail the class.

Evidence

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Finally students shouldn't have an extracurricular activity because it could make the students very stressed and tired at school

Claim

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they spend their time outside to play sports also students have gym classes where they do many different activitys.

Evidence

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In this passage I personally think that he did an good job with this artical.

Position

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He mad sure that he included everythings that he needed to put in the artical.

Evidence

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venus is earth sister

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NASA going to check out other planets

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explain the planet to.

Claim

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Venus is the sister ouf the plantet earth because its to closes to earth.

Claim

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What i mean to the closes is Venus could possible be another earth because it has the same features and it may well once have been the most earth - like plantet in our solar system, and in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth is closes to venus and mars but orbit the sun at different speeds means sometimes we are closer to mar and sometime venus.

Evidence

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The NASA has talked about idea like sending humans to study venus.

Claim

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They talk about what they going to bring and how far it is and what they are going to be doing. in the passage he talked about what happen in the war and how did it affect . and maybe having electronics up there too.

Evidence

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This passage describe venus

Claim

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he say that the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanets venus. The temperature in venus could averagr over 800 degrees fahrenheit. he dec=scrive the atnospheric pressure as 90 times greater than what we experience on earth.

Evidence

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In this passage I learned alot that i did not know about. I personally think he did good in this passage because he made me learn and i enjoyed reading this passage . I learn about venus and learn about NASA and what they might going to do.

Concluding Statement

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Well it's getting close to that time of year again, summer time! Warm air, bright shinning sun, and many activities that are only available during the summer season. But if you are like some students who go to certain schools maybe not so much. Some schools across the country require students to preform school based learning projects during their summer break. There projects are said to continue in helping kids and teens learn about subjects outside of school. Most of the projects are given by the teacher for the student to complete but some think that this decision should change.

Lead

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What many teachers don't realize is that teenagers are slowly being thrown into adulthood. Every year we have seen more and more teenagers be pushed into adult responsibility even when they are so young. Many students have to get jobs in the summer to support their families and help them. Some students work on farms which require all hands on deck. Some students even have wives and children to take care of.

Evidence

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While the idea of the over the summer projects are neat they really should be student run.

Position

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These students want the power this time and the choice to choose what they want to do. They want to be able to pick the subject that they are interested in and pursue it, this time with nothing and no one in their way.

Claim

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Many students in the United States have been diagnosed with a learning disability. Whether is be reading, understand, or they just generally struggle to grasp a concept, these student have it hard. They are already given a disadvantage when they enter into the learning ring. Many of the students attend summer programs to assist them with their disabilities. Many teachers do not take this into account which leads to upset, angry, and stressed out students who truly can't help it. However, with them in control of these summer projects they could make something that conforms to them.

Evidence

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The project, with them behind the learning wheel, could also assist them with their disability.

Claim

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They could make it something they understand and can learn at their own pace while also learning about something they enjoy. They can finally be set free and be given the power and choice to learn a pursuing subject, but also have something that conforms to their personal needs.

Evidence

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Students as a word is something that a lot of people see as a word used to describe kids and teens who go to school, learn, then return to perfect homes. That might have been the case year ago, but not anymore. In today's society kids and teens are being pushed to take responsibility. They are being pushed to work and survive without guidance from parental figures. The idea of the over the summer projects is neat, but if they are truly going to work then the students should be in control. Getting a choice and a say so in the matter is what may students long for and want, because they may have never had it before. They get to choose and pursue something they may have always dreamed of and want to chase after. With nothing holding them back except their drive and imaginations, these students will finally have a choice to follow their dreams to something much bigger.

Concluding Statement

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Every living thing on planet earth has emotions. These emotions have been used since the beginning of time to express the feelings of the people around you. However, these emotions can be decieving. Someone could say they are happy, when really they are angry or upset. This is where the Facial Action Coding System comes into play. The FACS is a software that detects human emotion by tracking muscles in the face. For example, when you are happy, muscles in your face move up, and when you are sad, they move down, FACS tracks this and calculates your emotions. The creators of this software, Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe are the leading experts of developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. There are still some questions surrounding the usefulness of FACS, like what could this software actually be used for? One of the ways FACS may be used is in classrooms.

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It may sound far fetched, but actually, FACS may be the best thing to come to schools

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flexible learning

Claim

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the ability to read the students.

Claim

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In the education world, teachers are the backbone of the infestructure. Without teachers, the whole system would collapse. However, it may be hard for one teacher to connect with every student individually and make sure they are learning properly or if they are paying attention. This is where FACS comes in. In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile", Dr. Huang talks about FACS in classrooms more in depth, "'A classroom computer could recgonize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human istructor.'"

Evidence

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With FACS, every child could essentially have a customized lesson plan exactly for their needs. This would make children more eager to learn because they begin to enjoy it.

Claim

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Besides the classroom, FACS could also be used in the school elsewhere.

Claim

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One of the other important areas this could be used is in counceling.

Evidence

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It is very hard for anyone to tell someone they are sad. This is especally true when they barely know the person they are talking to. This can be the case for school councelors and the children they are meeting with. FACS may be able to help.

Evidence

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With FACS, the school could see if children are upset or scared.

Claim

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The school could also see how often these children feel this way. When a child is unhappy or scared, it is very unlikely that they are going to be doing their work at full capacity. If FACS could find these children that need help, they could be helped faster. This could also be used to find children being bullied. If the child is feeling scared around another student, or if a child is afraid of a classroom, they could be helped because FACS was able to read them. FACS may even be able to detect if a child is afraid of leaving school. With FACS, it's like every child in school has someone that is looking out for them, even if no one else is

Evidence

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It may be true that some children might not want people to know about this, that they may want to hide it.

Counterclaim

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However, it is never healthy to hide such strong emotions, especally if there are people around you willing to help.

Rebuttal

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With the constant evoultion of the way we learn, its not suprising that something like FACS was created. Emotions have been with everything living since the beginning of time. Before FACS, it was suprisingly difficult to read these emotions in people. Such a crucial part of our everyday lives could be easily hidden away by a fake smile or a theatre tear. But now that there is FACS helping out, looks are no longer decieving.

Concluding Statement

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This story is about evaluating The Challenge of Exploring Venus. In the first paragraph it is kinda misleading because it says that venus sometimes called the evening star is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Then it goes on to talk about how venus is also a planet so the name is very misleading. Then paragraph two it talks about how its a planet again not a star and its saying that its the closest planet to earth.

Lead

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Venus is the closest planet to earth and yet to there has been a spacecraft to survive the landing. Although it could be a little bit tough seems haw venus's atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. On venus surface the temperatues average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. With that kind of heat and pressure could even crush a submarine.

Evidence

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In conclusion the story had some great details about what venus was like compared to earth but i also think that it was a little misleading about star planet and i think that could have been fixed up so it didnt have you on your toes trying to find out wether or not it was a star or a planet that was earths twin.

Concluding Statement

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Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and accasionally the closest in distance too. the speed between Mars, Venus, and Earth orbit the sun in different speeds. these difference in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times venus A thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmophere. on the planet's surface, tempers average over 800 degrees

Evidence

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this showws how dangerous it s trying to study venus specially with the high percentages that this story has about venus.

Claim

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Paragraph 4 the authour asks " if our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing further visit to its surface?" he states that astronomers are fasinated by planet in our solor system , long ago, Venus was probably covered large;y with oceans and could have supported varous forms of life, just like earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.

Evidence

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I think people should join the program

Position

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that way they or we can help people or other countries in need of help.

Claim

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If other countries need help or something like water or food or something like that like maybe more homes to build for the homeless. Another good thing about it is that you can travel around the world and the states like if there are more animals do in need because they are in danger and almost extinct! The best part is that you go out around the world and help out everything and if you are in the news for that and the people see that you were on the news with all of you friends then they might as well congratulat you.

Evidence

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Hi, I'm Luke Bomberger. I was a Seagoing Cowboy. You might be pondering what that is, and if you are, I will inform you. Seagoing Cowboys help animals, mostly horses, donkeys, cows, and mules, that are being shipped overseas to avoid harm get to their destination. Are you thinking that you maight like being part of this program?

Lead

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you can help animals that are in danger and get to know them

Claim

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This gives you a good feeling of helpfulness and compassion. I love to save lives, especially if they're animals'. I also liked to be freinds with them. Even though there are many other people on the boat with you, the creatures all have their own personalities, and this makes them fun to hang out with.

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you get to see the world

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I have seen the Acropolis in Greece, the Panama Canal, and an excavated castle in Crete. I have been to Europe, China, and Italy. You can go to all of these places, see these sights, and more if you join their program.

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there are so many people on the boat with you that it is impossible not to make a friend and have fun almost every day

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I have made ample new companions. There are also many games played on the ship. They include baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, reading, boxing, and whittling. As you can probably tell, these are all exciting to do with your buddies.

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Although there are a few risks, such as stormy weather,

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t is worth it to see the animals get safely to their destination. You can join knowing that you will be making big differences in millions of creatures' lives.

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If you want to have an amazing time with friends, play enjoyable games, see awesome landmarks and buildings, and help and make friends with animals

Concluding Statement

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you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.

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limiting car usage can have many advantages

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a big topic would be because of the gas getting in the air creating "smog" or pollution.

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Keeping the earth clean but banning cars can make the enviornment a better place.

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limiting the use of cars can be very good for our enviornment because it would make the air less polluted

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